theblackturnip Says:

Apr 8, 2008 - finally something decent to jack off to on the internet.

Archaikos Says:

Apr 8, 2008 - 1:) the gun is too big 2:) bullets too small

ingridg1983 Says:

Apr 22, 2008 - True. Bullets matching the gun shown would have made substantial exit wounds, especially the head shot.

WinterZday Says:

Apr 22, 2008 - In the real world. Which this clearly isn't.

PhoenixakaJeanGrey Says:

Apr 30, 2008 - Agreed.

PhoenixakaJeanGrey Says:

Apr 30, 2008 - All right, that was good, but i do agree with USP1986, she looked unprofesional, and thou my friend that's here didn't notice since his a guy and was looking at her OO, her wrist motions were clumsy, and her accent, was that real? Sounded so strange. Oh, and the one in the bikini, did she drop the headphones in the water? And bad accting when she said 'Matthew! Mathew!" Too fake, but good when she said 'who the hell are you supossed to be?' Nice thou. Good job.

DNAngel50000000 Says:

Jun 13, 2008 - i agree with ingridg1983, Bullets matching the gun shown would have made substantial exit wounds, especially the head shot. Becky Stephens, her characters accent was too fake...i am not a critic but this is very good.

sarahgop Says:

Jun 15, 2008 - wow

WinterZday Says:

Jun 15, 2008 - As I say below, I'm not making this to be realistic, that wasn't the intention or desire at all.

Zambezio Says:

Jun 19, 2008 - nice girls:D

endbosshazard Says:

Jul 2, 2008 - The assassin was hot, the other girl just had a large bust, and the quality of the camera used seems pretty decently pro-sumer level. But the sound is distractingly bad, and could have been greatly improved with a better use of the mic. I think the film-maker also realized that the girl in the bath tub only had big boobs going for her, and they felt the need to show it off by having her wear a SWIMSUIT to the BATH? I guess because implying she's naked means they can't get her jugs on screen.

WinterZday Says:

Jul 3, 2008 - The (boringly repetitive, I must say) question about the bikini in the bath is rendered redundant by the point that if she was as naked as the commenters want, the clip would have been pulled from You Tube. If this really gives people problems, check out the Internet. Rumour has it that bare breasts have been seen there. Personally I'm not a fan of this clip. It's weak in many areas (not just sound) all of which are my responsibility as director. But it was my first time out.

endbosshazard Says:

Jul 3, 2008 - See, I just *knew* that my comment would be misconstrued into me wanting to see breasts. The girl could have very easily been doing ANYTHING, and taking a bath was not in any way significant to the story. At least, she could have been in the bath and "naked" off screen. But no, it was so important to find a way to have her boobs on screen, so she's wearing a bathing suit for NO REASON OTHER THAN TO FIND A WAY TO SHOW US HOW BIG HER BOOBS ARE.

WinterZday Says:

Jul 3, 2008 - Well, you did mention her breasts twice in your original post... One of the reasons I dislike this clip is that there *isn't* any story (at best it's a weak surprise about the "sister sent me" at the end). This (and Have You Seen...) were just done to do a few gun-girl moments/scenes. They *should* have been plotted and themed and character-arced, but they weren't. She's in the bath because it was a well lit room in an otherwise dark location (and we had no appreciable extra light).

WinterZday Says:

Jul 3, 2008 - Should also say that the article about this video on the RBG website explains a lot more about the clip. It even rationalises the swimsuit. I don't like this clip. It's the worst thing I've ever done by some way, and yet has proved more popular than many others. Depressing as hell.

endbosshazard Says:

Jul 3, 2008 - Yeah, and one of them was to mention that the purpose of the movie seemed more to showcase them than to actually make sense. But I see now that it was your first project, it was just kinda tossed together, etc etc, and on that regard, it's pretty decent. I've seen more experienced people do a lot worse.

WinterZday Says:

Jul 3, 2008 - When I look at this video, yes, "toss" is one of the words I have in mind! I'll defend the work of everyone involved, however. I was director, they did what I asked, if it's weak, then that's my fault. It also bugs the hell out of me that I never storyboarded this. So many shots would have been so much better. Still, you have to learn somewhere, and this went on to inform and help the others, so...

Vulcan1963 Says:

Jul 28, 2008 - Would have been more realistic to hear the empty cases fall to the ground after the shots. Also, a heat shot from point blank range would have gone through the head completely with the appropriate blood spatter all over the back wall. Saucy short film though!

TheMightyDamo Says:

Aug 16, 2008 - yes you should redo this with a head splatter!!

brianelitelion Says:

Sep 11, 2008 - that was so dumb yu would hear a usp even with a can if you were upstairs and a usp is a .45 cal the head would blow off in chunks not just hold the bullet

WinterZday Says:

Sep 12, 2008 - As I say above, I wasn't striving for an accurate representation of an assassination, just something a bit sexy or stylish, if that's your kind of thing. If I was being accurate, the killer wouldn't be wearing what she's wearing, there'd be gloves, etc., etc., etc. Not meant to be real!

gxcope Says:

Sep 28, 2008 - definitly sexy...and well done

punkkgurl61 Says:

Oct 25, 2008 - That was frickin' retarded. There was absolutely no point to this other than someone was perverted and wanted to see some girl in her bathing suit. It's degrading. So thanks jerk.

twenty2082 Says:

Nov 3, 2008 - i like 45-49

starstruck83 Says:

Nov 23, 2008 - Fi is gorgeous!